It is hard to work out the pacing and repetition of the segments that work and the segments that don't work. Is it in fact because of the relative pacing that something works and something doesn't or is it the nature of the images themselves? Or is it the combinations of images that do or don't work. It is so difficult to tell when the image speed is so fast. And yet, if I slow down the speed of the images, will I get the same answers as to what works and what doesn't.
I like the sections that are distinct because of strong colour, for example the red cloth. Also the strong shapes of the blurred horses. But also important are the pale grey of the water tank surface and the texture of the water tank rust.